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« Reply #5 on: April 06, 2009, 03:12:24 PM »
Okey dokey. So I better dive in at the deep end with my new project then and see how the
story works. Eek. Roll Eyes

Thank you ScriptNurse.
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« Reply #4 on: April 06, 2009, 01:55:19 PM »
Your "sins" are mostly subtle.
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Don Bledsoe
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Want to write screenplays? READ SCREENPLAYS!
Write it right and they'll say it right! NO SPEEDBUMPS!
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« Reply #3 on: April 06, 2009, 01:36:50 PM »
Thanks guys.

Well, I would like to know anything. I am a novice. I have put up a practice piece from one of my stories, so I suppose if you could tell me what my script sins are, maybe I will get on the right track. Thank you for your time. It's in the Showcase

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« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2009, 07:50:44 AM »
Indeed, welcome!
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Don Bledsoe
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« Reply #1 on: April 05, 2009, 09:14:05 PM »
Welcome!
You've found us, and we help all you'll allow.
Questions?  Ask.  The only stupid question is the one you didn't ask.

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« on: April 05, 2009, 11:15:08 AM »
My name is Mairi and I have been writing for about 20 months. I would like to learn more about script writing. I like
making up stories. I have major issues with punctuation, in particular the comma.  Huh They hate me. Grin I am looking
forward to talking to you and hopefully learning how to make my work better. I have a skin as thick as a Rhino as far 
as my work goes, so feel free to throw any advice at me.

I live in a small village in England.

Oh I'm old enough to remember 60's music. Grin

Ma Smiley
 
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