Unseen Logline and summary

[ScriptNurse]

I like the short version.

[Bodacea]

Very good ... can you craft a 12-15 word version also?

Thanks.  A 12 to 15 word one eh? Well the shortest I could get it was something like this:

A father struggles to keep his family together when they're haunted by vengeful spirits.

 

[ScriptNurse]

Very good ... can you craft a 12-15 word version also?

[Bodacea]

Hi all. 

Please tell me what you think of my logline and brief summary used for my horror screenplay I've just finished:

LOGLINE AND BRIEF SUMMARY:
A father struggles to keep his family from falling apart when they’re assaulted by the vengeful spirits of a house that holds dark secrets.

Justin Goodliffe, a single father tries to cope with forces and irrational events he has no understanding of, but when his children are attacked by poltergeists and a priest confesses his own sins, he must make decisions that challenge everything he has come to know.