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« Reply #1 on: May 18, 2009, 10:57:34 PM »

A boy comes of age and learns that the father he wanted isn't the real man he found when they survive a place called Pacifica.

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« on: May 17, 2009, 03:42:46 PM »

Would love comments, suggestions, anything on this.  Thanks!

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Surviving Pacifica

Logline:  The Father he wanted, isn’t the man he discovered.

   Avery Thompson’s Mother has just recently married the man of her dreams.  Things seem to be perfect.  After all, Avery has always wanted a Father figure. 
   Soon chores become more demeaning and his Mother starts not believing Avery about the strange things he’s seen his new Father doing.  Deciding that a little bonding would be a good thing for the boys, Avery and his new Step-Father embark upon a journey to a place called “Pacifica” in the Great Northwest, where his Step-Father says he used to go camping and hiking all the time.  But Avery doesn’t know that “Pacifica” will show him what it means to stand up against the odds and shed light on who the real man his Mother married truly is.
   Surviving Pacifica opens up a world where a boy is shown becoming a man in the most trying of times.  When choosing to follow rules can cost someone a lifetime of  memories and nightmares.
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