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« Reply #3 on: June 10, 2009, 03:12:11 AM »
How about: Three escaped convicts find themselves on the flipside of the coin as they fall victim to a group of teens out for a wild party in the woods.
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« Reply #2 on: May 24, 2009, 08:53:30 PM »
Hunted?

That's a tough one...

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« Reply #1 on: May 24, 2009, 11:47:41 AM »
terrorized ... tortured ... stalked ... savagely tormented ...

"terror" is so often used these days that perhaps people has de-sensitized to it. I was looking for a higher-energy descriptive. Anyone else?
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« on: May 24, 2009, 09:06:43 AM »
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Three escaped convicts are terrorized by a group of psychotic teens partying in the woods.


This is for another script. A horror/crime/thriller genre.

Does the logline build interest in reading the script?
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