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« Reply #1 on: November 15, 2009, 01:28:18 PM »
Whether your teenagers walked, drove or were teleported is irrelevant. What they did was to discover a UFO ... but then what? Does it come to life? Do they discover evidence that it was tampered with and they come to learn the UFO was dumped in the water by the military?

In 1955, five teenagers discover a sunken UFO ... but then what?
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« on: November 15, 2009, 10:21:48 AM »
Just finished second draft of my latest screenplay and figured now would be a good time to knock out a logline. What do you think?


1955. Five teenagers venture out on a weekend houseboat excursion and discover a sunken UFO.
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