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« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2009, 09:35:12 PM »
I read it and sent an email.
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« on: December 01, 2009, 05:33:06 PM »
Hello,

 I would really appreciate you input on my short screenplay "Unborn", it is only 14 pages, and is going into production this weekend! 

Let me know what you think, and what, if anything could be eliminated or shorted.

Thank you

Unborn d5.1.pdf - 0.06MB
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