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« on: December 20, 2009, 05:04:34 PM »

You can check my latest work here:

http://comicscripts.thomasamckean.com

Comic book scripts and outlines, written with Final Draft and Story View, respectively.

A Grave Situation (Revised) and Dark Goddess really aren't bad.  The rest are pure crap.  Two of them (Super Friends) had to be crap because writing badly was the only way to write them well!  Those of you who grew up watching the Super Friends, you know exactly what I mean.  (Like remember the Flash standing there saying, "I've only got a fraction of a second to stop Captain Cold from freezing the city!  If he fires his freeze gun, he'll start a new ice age!  I have to use my super speed to stop him NOW!"  Hey, Flash, buddy...Less talk, more walk!)

If you are in the mood for some bad writing (I am so new at this), take a look.

Please keep in mind as you read them that I have won many awards for writing prose and poetry.  I just suck at writing scripts is all.  Smiley

Here's some log lines from the scripts and outlines.  (Assuming I remember what log lines are.  It has been a while!)

Phantom Stranger: A Grave Situation (Revised) - A young girl is needlessly blaming herself for her mother's death. What can the Phantom Stranger do to ease her troubled mind?

Super Friends: Small Wonder - Years after Wendy and Marvin leave, years after Zan and Jayna return to Exxor, the Super Friends reunite when one of them faces tragedy. Unknown to the Super Friends, the Legion of Doom is also back together, and they have hatched their most fiendish plot ever against the Super Friends! Includes the five original Super Friends and both sets of Junior Super Friends.

Super Friends: Small Wonder (Unofficial Director's Cut) - The "Small Wonder" story the way it was originally meant to be told. This is the "Non-Rozakis" version and is not the official story. Please see other version for that.

Isis: Dark Goddess - A completed outline for a novel based on the 1970's Saturday morning live action series, "The Secrets of Isis". When the amulet falls into evil hands, can Andrea defeat the Dark Isis without her powers??

Hawkgirl: The Blue Smoke Wore a Red Dress - Hawkgirl is out shopping when she spots blue smoke wearing a red dress! Can she solve this mystery on her own?

http://comicscripts.thomasamckean.com

I have two more comics to write, then I go back to writing prose again.  Though I do have an interesting idea for an animated screenplay called The Lions of Judah.  It would based on a true story that happened here in my small town of Liberty, VA.
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