Need Help With My Script

[ScriptNurse]

This needs work. Scene heading format:

INT. / EXT. LOCATION - TIME-OF-DAY

Example:

EXT. CITY MUSEUM STEPS - NIGHT

There is no useful description of the characters or their ages.

Learn the difference between "pale" and "pail".

The writing is not very visual ... that is, the description doesn't conjure up an image in my mind. I can't really "see" in my head what you're describing. I would be willing to guess you've not read many screenplays ... yet.

[farooqanwar]

Hi,

I just finished a first draft. It still needs a lot of work, but I seem to be suffering from writer's block. Need help.

Thanks,
Farooq