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Author Topic: help with another logline.. one im passionate about.  (Read 1928 times)
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NutsForGettoBooty50
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« Reply #2 on: October 23, 2010, 07:23:25 AM »
Thanks, what do you think of it in general? does the idea interst you?
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« Reply #1 on: October 22, 2010, 08:31:49 PM »
"An ambitious young MMA fighter, rising in the ranks of a top Japanese promotion, must deal with the pressure brought by increasing fame, growing fortune, and his out-of-control teammates."

Not a major change, but maybe it'll help kick things off.

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« on: October 22, 2010, 07:34:30 AM »
"a young, ambitious MMA fighter, while rising the ranks of a top Japanese MMA promotion, while dealing with the pressures of fame, fortune and his out of control MMA team."

any help in re writting it would be very appreciated or any feedback. im ancious to get going on this script. if it intersts anybody let know because thats a sign its a hot script.
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