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« Reply #8 on: April 14, 2011, 05:09:30 PM »
Hero's Daughter Fights Dad's Killer
(a script I wrote last year - 40 pages - Daddy's Girl)

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« Reply #7 on: April 13, 2011, 08:14:35 AM »
Casino Island Invaded by Vampires

Charlie Brown Vs Charlies Angels

Serial Killer Stalks Captain Crunch

Successful Investor Buys Last Starbucks

Elvis Found in himalayas expedition

BigFoot enters Bikini Contest Wins
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« Reply #6 on: April 12, 2011, 06:33:42 PM »
HASBEEN HOTEL ... old stars go to work ... or ... old stars save their home.
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Write better ... right now! Good scripts are those that get bought.
Want to write screenplays? READ SCREENPLAYS!
Write it right and they'll say it right! NO SPEEDBUMPS!
Want control? GO TO FILM SCHOOL!
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« Reply #5 on: April 11, 2011, 11:17:19 AM »
I'll Try Another Script,

Industrial Designer Becomes Intergalactic Protector

(This one is My Real Script) Called: Second Chance

An Industrial Designer, Loving father and Husband, has 4 daughters and 1 is stollen from her bedroom at midnight by a Pedophile/Sex Offender (neighborhood garbageman). He discovers the Address of the criminal and takes matters on his own hands and kills everyone in the house that the offender lives at, the Offender escapes. He (Protagonist) is sent to the Electric Chair. On the day of His execution, Just when the guard is about to pull the switch, a portal opens and three Intergalactic beings exit the portal and freeze time. The main Being is in Human form to not scare the protag, is an Intergalactic Judge and is given full authority to Pick a new "Hunter" a Bounty Hunter, the other 2 beings are autonimous Police from a Robot-Planet million miles in the Galaxy. The 2 are early concepts of a design he had in a sketchbook and his sketchbook was stollen from his office many years ago. they are from the future. The 2 Rototic Police treat the protag as a Father and will do anything for him. He is Given a "Second Chance" by the Intergalactic Judge to escape his Execution and help them catch a criminal that will eventualy cause a time paradox.
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« Reply #4 on: April 11, 2011, 03:34:06 AM »
Let me amend that.

Knock Out

Insecure fighter becomes confident model.
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« Reply #3 on: April 11, 2011, 02:37:55 AM »
Knock Out.

Neurotic fighter becomes confident model.
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« Reply #2 on: April 10, 2011, 08:36:48 PM »
I'll try one, for my script, Dante.....now undergoing it's umpteenth rewrite.

"He kills for God."
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« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2011, 02:36:03 PM »
How about,

Blind Spy is Undercover Masseusse
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« on: April 10, 2011, 01:28:47 PM »
I'll Start.

Blind Masseuse is Undercover Spy
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