New here--this is actually my first post! But the subject matter intrigues me.
With little to go on, might I suggest that you drop the matter of the daughter from the logline. It sounds like a secondary plot. Rather than confuse your audience (and reader) with something complicated, concentrate on the
psychic aspect of things. That's what you bait your hook with! And (I speak as a Bible-believer), let's remember that, in today's culture, God and religion are often automatic turn-offs--especially in Hollywood! You may have a great story of spiritual discovery and redemption, but lots of people will dismiss this as something from Billy Graham or Sherwood Films.
As a newcomer, I suggest you keep it short and juicy. I'm thinking of something like, "An accomplished psychic is shocked to learn that just because something is spiritual, it is not necessarily from God."
Are you still working on that story? Try playing with that concept, and good luck!
