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« Reply #2 on: December 23, 2011, 06:14:21 PM »
Quote from: ScriptNurse on December 22, 2011, 10:55:15 PM
" ... prescribed medication ..." — does this mean it could turn into something like:

A man with a panic disorder is sent to a psychiatrist, who is really an escaped mental patient and sadistic serial killer, and the medication he is forced to take alters his reality as he experiences violent hallucinations and the desire to kill.


It's actually based on a personal experience, I just embelished a lot and made it into a horror story. So, I don't think that would work, even though it's a good idea.
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« Reply #1 on: December 22, 2011, 10:55:15 PM »
" ... prescribed medication ..." — does this mean it could turn into something like:

A man with a panic disorder is sent to a psychiatrist, who is really an escaped mental patient and sadistic serial killer, and the medication he is forced to take alters his reality as he experiences violent hallucinations and the desire to kill.
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« on: December 21, 2011, 03:31:13 PM »
Title: Between Reality (not completely set on this)
Genre: Horror/Thriller
Logline: A man develops a panic disorder after his wife leaves him and is sent to a psychiatrist. After being prescribed medication, his reality becomes blurred and he begins experiencing violent hallucinations.


This is my first attempt, but feel free to be completely brutal and honest. That's what we're here for, right?
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