Foul Language

Originally posted by Anorexorcist on 6-11-2005 12:54 AM: Foul Language

I've always been told that excessive foul language is just compensation for poor vernacular, so my question is:

What is the thought on this when scripts are read?

I view it as depending on the story/situation (i.e Resevoir Dogs, but not Beaches), but am not sure if that is how the "industry" views it.

The reason I'm bringing this up is that my idea for the mini movie is filled with f-bombs. I did this, because after reading the dialogue aloud I felt it would be more natural in to have alot of cursing. Will it be frowned upon?

Posted by ScriptNurse on 6-14-2005 7:17 PM:

If it's appropriate for the character, do it. Not everyone has had such values instilled in them and some personality flaws dictate vulgar behavior. Just be sure it's well grounded and motivated. If the reader detects that it's just for effect, you're doomed. However, before you sharpen your tongue ... see if there's another way ... a twist that engages and thrills the reader. A cold-blooded emotionless killer that behaves like a priest is more engaging than a roughneck gone berserk — somehow you expect the roughneck to do what he does, but not the priest. It's the contrast that makes it interesting.

Regarding your entry ... the above rules apply.