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padnar
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« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2007, 01:05:29 AM »
hai padma here
I liked the story very much quite emotional and without
sex or bad language. I actually was worried that one should bad language for script writing
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« Reply #2 on: December 13, 2005, 08:06:48 PM »
Sorry, I missed the link at the end of your message.

Downloaded, and I'll read it soon.  Notes to follow.

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« Reply #1 on: December 13, 2005, 08:05:16 PM »
Sure, I'm willing to give it a go.

You can email it to me at ajlb@columnist.com and I'll tell you what I think.

(For what it's worth, anyway.)

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« on: December 13, 2005, 07:01:03 AM »
hello all! Does anyone mind reading my short film script about a pizza boy in a difficult situation. I am already in pre-production on this badboy but always wanting to improve upon it, so any feedback at all would be wicked!

Say what you feel, im a hard bastard.

you can post your comments here or email me personally at gozborne@hotmail.com

thanks guys and gals! any advice would be valuable.

Gary Osborne
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