Synopsis for Animation Script

Here is a work in progress synopsis for a script I have just completed entitled GIZ, MO AND JOE: ABSOLATION. I would love some feedback if you have the time.

Synopsis: Joe Wanderloo may be the most intelligent six-year-old in the universe. Fatefully, he may be the loneliest. But on the night Giz and Mo, two robots from the future, are accidentally knocked into a wormhole and thrust into Joe’s life… fate proves to be as fickle as it is fantastic.

In less than forty-eight hours the wormhole is going to collapse. Not only will Joe build a rocket and send Giz and Mo home, he will promise to keep them secret from the people he needs to connect with most, namely his Dad. More importantly, Joe will discover the friendship he’s always dreamed of and he will soar to unimaginable heights, gaining the tools and confidence he needs to take on the world. But fate can also be ferocious. On the night of their departure, Giz inadvertently reveals a frightening secret about the future… THE BIG HUSH. As much as Joe pleads for more information, cosmic law forbids it. Alas, Giz and Mo aren’t the only one’s with knowledge of the future. A mysterious presence lurking in the distant mountains has been waiting with a secret of his own and when he learns of the robot’s arrival he expedites his twisted intentions, luring Joe into a tangled web of deceit.

With a future uncertain and hope slipping away, Joe will need more than a miracle to prevent the inevitable… he will need ABSOLATION.