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Author Topic: just about to start the shoot of my first psycho thriller  (Read 2339 times)
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« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2007, 06:42:15 PM »

The obvious choice is VOICES.
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« Reply #4 on: November 06, 2007, 05:34:49 AM »

hey guys.... i need help here plz.... the title that i came up for the short film gives away the suspence and the main part of the film.... i want a title which does not give away the suspence and it also looks intriguing at the same time... the film is a psychothriller and so should get an impression of a psycho thriller as well without giving out the main point.... plz help me out..

here is the main plot:

a guy wakes up in the morning and he has a voice in his head telling him to kill somebody because nothing can happen to him today. the guy for sure gets a weird feeling but the voice is very captivating and persuasive and starts to consume him. he had a arty last night and some of his frnds got drunk. he has a car of his frnd who was drunk the previous night and he goes to give the car back. at his frnds home he starts to talk about his problem but his frnd thinks that he is still high and needs rest. the guy leaves him and starts walking towards the bus stop. there he meets a guy who just randomly says that you can kill me. this thing for sure strikes him but the inner voice gets disturbing and he gives in. he takes the sadist person to a roof and throws him off the roof. when he is about to come down from the stairs he sees the same guy who he threw down coming upstairs. this thing makes him lose control. the sadist guy tells him that he is the devil and he just found out that the main guy is a weak person, very easy to command and order. the inner voices start again and starts to consume him. with this the main guy jumps off the roof and kills himslef to end the suffering.

this is a very summerized kind of plot of the story that i wrote. i need the title. what i came up with is Devil's Intention. it gives away everything. plz help me out and give me a better title. if you need the screenplay to read, please  do tell. i'll put it up. but try with the summary because my connection kinda sucks. please help me out!!!

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« Reply #3 on: November 05, 2007, 07:03:00 PM »

thanks! i will need it!
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« Reply #2 on: November 04, 2007, 01:46:42 AM »

thanks! i will need it!
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« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2007, 06:19:02 PM »

We wish you the best of luck!
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« on: November 03, 2007, 07:52:33 AM »

i wrote a screenplay recently. it is a psycho thriller. now i am about to produce and direct it. its an assignment of my college. i hope i get an A!
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