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Author Topic: "Anastasia´s Pyramid", mystery/horror screenplay.  (Read 1410 times)
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« Reply #2 on: December 31, 2007, 08:40:43 AM »

Thanks, I´ll consider your advice.  Smiley
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« Reply #1 on: December 27, 2007, 11:27:48 AM »

A logline should be one sentence, if possible. This is a very intriguing story. How about this ...

"A young man goes to a remote English island to tutor an eccentric man's son and notices a forced happiness that masks the family's secrets about the death of their daughter and the mother's seclusion in the mansion's attic."
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« on: December 25, 2007, 08:35:57 PM »

Hello:

"Anastasia´s Pyramid", mystery/horror screenplay.

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Martin, a young private teacher, travels to a small island off the coast of England to tutor the son of Edmund Welcker, an eccentric businessman of German origins. Once there, he soon finds himself surrounded by forced gaiety that serves to mask the secrets contained within the old family mansion. Some years previously, the family lost one of its members, the young Anastasia; and the mother now lives strangely secluded in the attic.

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Author: Carlos Burgaleta (burgaletas@correo.cop.es)
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