My pitch

[sharry]

watch and read the screenplay of 'whitnail and i' before. it will help you immensely. it goes somewhat with your premise. it can work. just make it as real as you can.

[seansshack]

Could work. Would introduce some conflict (in the form of success and friends out growing each other).

If you want any of them to make it. Have one succeed and explore the guilt, jealousy side of leaving a friend behind.

Just a thought...

[padnar]

why not ? You can write about how difficult it is to
become a Director especially you can make him an Indian
Ashok  Amritraj and Shymlan has succeeded
and  for the actor yu can use the cast couch syndrome
I think the idea is ok but it all depends on yu
padma

[Runi1024]

Hey so I'm new here and recently begun to write a script for a pitch that came to me late one night.

I'm not really sure what genre it falls under but the main gist of story is:

The title is "Follow Through" and its about a girl and her best friend who are both very interested in the entertainment business. The girl wants to be an actress and her friend wants to be a director. The story is following the girl's journey to stardom.  I have already thought up an ending it's just getting there that I'm skeptical of.

Is this an idea worth perusing?

-Runi