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Shindig
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« Reply #3 on: April 17, 2008, 04:27:35 AM »

Yeah, just motion him into the shower.  It's not as if they're two separate rooms.
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« Reply #2 on: April 16, 2008, 06:31:51 PM »

Once you're in the bathroom, do you need ANY slugline? Just indicate it in the action description.
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« Reply #1 on: April 15, 2008, 08:57:45 PM »

You might want to try something like this:

INT. WILLARD'S APARTMENT - BATHROOM - DAY

to

INT. WILLARD'S APARTMENT - SHOWER - MOMENTS LATER

This is just one suggestion.  Their are probably a dozen ways this can be written, but this how I would do it.  Any time you change a location or time, you should have a new scene heading.
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« on: April 15, 2008, 06:52:18 PM »

There's a quick scene I'm trying to write where my character is shaving at his bathroom sink. After that, we're with him in the shower as he washes his face, soaps his hair, perhaps brushes his teeth. But with the shower door closed, and it being in a way, a separate area, does the scene change from

INT. WILLARD'S APARTMENT, WILLARD'S BATHROOM - MORNING

to

INT. WILLARD'S BATHROOM, THE SHOWER - MORNING

Thanks in advance.
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