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Author Topic: Writing the screenplay of my story need some help  (Read 1424 times)
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« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2008, 05:51:06 AM »

Read this:

http://www.awn.com/mag/issue4.04/4.04pages/williamsonscript.php3 ... and be sure to click the link to see a sample page.

Here are some animation scripts:

ANTZ ... http://www.dailyscript.com/scripts/antz.html
TOY STORY ... http://www.dailyscript.com/scripts/toy_story.html
A GOOFY MOVIE ... http://web.archive.org/web/20030405064339/http://www.scriptdude.com/frames/moviescripts/GoofyMovie.pdf
THE LION KING ... http://imsdb.com/scripts/Lion-King,-The.pdf
SOUTH PARK: BIGGER, LONGER AND UNCUT ... http://www.dailyscript.com/scripts/south-park.html
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« on: July 21, 2008, 03:26:06 AM »


 I'm attempting to write the screenplay based on my story The Legend of Hani, but I'm wondering if you could please awnser some questions for me I'm alittle stuck.

 First off how much detail do I put into each line?

 I know from reading some book about animation screenplays they tell you to tell everything in the sceen, but at what point do I stop I could detail everything in every scene but would make the screenplay look like a text book.

 Is there any blue print to getting the right details out, and onto the page?

 Are there any words I should avoid using in the descriptions?

I will mostliky have more later but if you could awnser these I would be able to get a few scenes finished, any help would be of great help.

 
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