At an impasse

[uncle_al]

There's good professional help here. We're kind as well. We've been there.

Boy, howdy... have we ever.
Problems, however unique and insoluble they seem to you, are rarely so; somebody else has usually found a way around it.
More often than not, we know exactly what you've been going through.
Give us a try...
Cheers!
Al B.

[LloJo]

You need to post the part of your script that is bugging you, or at least tell us the problem(s) you're having.
There's good professional help here. We're kind as well. We've been there.

[dohope]

Hello Everyone,
Anyone care to mentor with suggestions and a listening ear so I can discuss scenes and garner help to resolve them.  This fictional period piece is starting to overwhelm me and I need help to keep going.
Thanks,
Dohope